Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and the protection is a waste of resources. to what extent do you agree or disagree
Undoubtedly, no one can deny the role of health some people think that good fitness is elementary of human need. However, many people say that some private association run their own medical service and they are always making profit by and by this these types of companies override the advantages of State health Care. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why medical service run by private health care and some of the challenges to be overcome.
On the other hand, there are some particular jobs, which required certain gender. Jobs which need some physical strength and strong mentality such as an army. Which can only done by a men. In contrast, women are quite emotional and as per their caring nature, they are best suitable gender for child care and as a nurses. Furthermore this types of certain works cannot be done by any other gender.
on the contrary, few people considering older citizens as a burden because of that countries poverty rate. increase in the poverty ratio is one of the horrible region of senior citizens becoming stress to the humankind. Older people require more attention and extra care. But because of generation gap and extreme poverty they are often ignored. Aged people cannot give their efforts to do for societies. For example, old age people cannot spend penny to their relatives. As a consequences they are probably ignored by community.
To recapitulate, I re-iterate my views that paying taxes is important for country's economy though, individual should be punctual of their own responsibilities.
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- Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit making companies.Do you think the disadvantages of the private Healthcare outweigh the advantages. 73
- Some people think children's spending time on TV video and PC games is good.While others think it is bad.Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 67
- When families have a meal together it is considered social activity do you think eating together is important in your country? 67
- Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society.other argue that being citizen involves more responsibilities.Discuss what is your opinion? 73
- some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel but other people think that is necessary for the development of science discuss both views and give your opinion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, for example, in contrast, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03861003861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63606769248 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2764310187 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.013231962661 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00486461853379 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0129993544177 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0067224308937 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00672423799512 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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