It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a tv, a car, and a fridge. Do you think the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantages?
Indeed, the world's economy has been improving for many previous years. Along with that, people's needs and their lifestyle are also changing. Nowadays, everyone is aiming to purchase their stuff like a motor car, a refrigerator, a TV, and many more. It has pros and cons. I believe that it is definitely a positive development because such small achievements in people's lives improve their happiness index and it is more advantageous on an overall.
Proponents of a sophisticated lifestyle cite a host of benefits. Everyone needs a comfortable life nowadays. In fact, the current market is so reliable that any common man can purchase life-related items including a car and many household stuff easily. One of my friends, for example, used to travel 100 KMs a day to his workplace using public transportation and had become bored in his life. Recently, he bought a car and using that to travel along with his colleagues. This has not only saved his precious energy but his crucial time also. Therefore, one must enjoy their life happily by chasing their dreams.
Furthermore, if people will buy something from the market, the concern governments would earn from their spendings through taxation. As a result, the government would be able to provide more facilities to their citizens. So, it is a win-win situation for both. It is rightly said that if the government is happy, then all are happy.
On the other hand, there are many drawbacks to costly shoppings. It is not all affordable for many people to purchase items related to entertainment and comfort. Even though they can buy such items at a small down-payments, their interest rates of loans are very high. There have been many recorded examples, where people fail literally to their high EMIs. Besides, the maintenance costs of such luxurious items are also very high. As a consequence, people get into financial traps, even there are some people who have become bankrupt and commit suicide due to massive mental stress. So, it is not worth to copy others in buying costlier items because it is not productive at all.
In conclusion, people must aim to improve their lifestyle but they should do proper financial management. I reiterate that it is always advantageous to own a private car, a tv, and many things but one has to be very calculative before their shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
Indeed, the worlds economy has been improving for many pre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... is more advantageous on an overall. Proponents of a sophisticated lifestyle ...
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...style cite a host of benefits. Everyone needs a comfortable life nowadays. In fact, the...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much household stuff', 'a good deal of household stuff'.
Suggestion: much household stuff; a good deal of household stuff
... life-related items including a car and many household stuff easily. One of my friends, for example,...
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Suggestion: as well
...is precious energy but his crucial time also. Therefore, one must enjoy their life h...
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...life happily by chasing their dreams. Furthermore, if people will buy somethin...
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Suggestion:
...ernment is happy, then all are happy. On the other hand, there are many drawba...
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... because it is not productive at all. In conclusion, people must aim to improv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98473282443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78684158583 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4910612564 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105372116033 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285518428451 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412278118118 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668616758628 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563959081554 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.