In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Long gone are the days when men used to work outside to earn living for the family and women were responsible for taking care of children and household work. It is not uncommon to see nowdays, while both the partners are working full-time, they take equal share in routine household activities. I completely agree with this balanced approach and this essay will discuss how a helping hand from men in household chores is beneficial in the long run.
To begin with, in this modern era women have proved themselves capable in every field of life whether it is household responsibility or other jonaras such as doctor, engineer, scientists, police or army. It would be very unfair and inhuman to expect a women to work full time and manage the household chores and responsibility of children solely. Women would find this exhausting and torturous which would have detrimental effects on their mental and physical state. Consequently, resulting into dissatisfaction, depression. In addition, she will not be able to continue to work as well as it can have negative impact on their relationship.
When men return from work all tired they expect care from their partner. For example, wife making him food and taking care of children. Likewise, if men help their wives in household activities, it would show love, care and appreciation from their husbands. This gesture will help maintain love and respect in their relationships.
Furthermore, when men provides a helping hand in the household tasks, they set an example for their children. It helps in incorporating good morals and values of lige in children. For instance, empathy, kindness, feeling of equality, respect and being independent.
In conclusion, I strongly assert that, to maintain a proper work and life balance, men and women should distribute their responsiblities fairly, which will help to maintain love in family and have positive impact on their children and society.
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...tive impact on their relationship. When men return from work all tired they exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, likewise, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20317460317 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87237561927 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8474664438 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244906057601 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804490137284 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662650236936 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142404558461 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667054632644 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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