Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Today online shopping is getting more common by the day. This inclination towards online buying has more benefits than disadvantages, because it is fast and also gives access to variety of products and services.
In recent times, people have limited time to do things because of increased work hours, therefore to make purchase, busy individuals use online platforms. In a physical shop the person will have to be present, wait in long queues for minutes to hours, go through lots of shelves to select what they want, this is not feasible for an individual who works 8 -12 hours a day and needs to manage time properly. For example, staff of Johnson pharmacy Nigeria are sometimes required to work 12 -15 hours a day, this has led to more than 80% of the staff members resorting to internet shopping to cut down time used to buy things and manage limited time effectively.
Online stores gives access to variety of products from different organizations, at the same time, in different locations of the world, unlike the offline stores which have only products available in the given location. The possibility of been able to access different ranges of products, compare and choose from different locations is an advantage people like and can only explore properly on the internet. For example, a popular Nigerian Facebook influencer makes her purchase online, because she can access different kinds of products online from all over the world instead of buying from one store in Abuja, which she considers limiting.
Some people might consider buying things online risky, however the disadvantage does not outweigh the benefits it gives such as good time management and wide ranges of products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07117437722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5872057448 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8500920418 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177062477634 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807661586476 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532191628344 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1171046832 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483387568404 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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