You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my complaint with stay at your hotel in New York city. I am Sam Williams and my booking ID: CHW5809B. I recently visited New York for a business conference and was checked in from 26th February to 28th February. During my stay I had issue with faulty air-conditioned. The climate was particularly hot and moist which was unexpected for that season which made the stay appalling.
As the cooling system was not working, I had to contact the reception and the front-desk mentioned that they will be updating me within 5 minutes. An hour later, I got a call from them stating the service engineer would be available next morning. As a result, I opened the window for fresh air and all the flying insect entered the room because of which I was not able to sleep the entire night.
I find this highly unacceptable. Rooms should have proper air conditioners and if in case there is an issue it should be rectified at earliest. I would like the payment for my stay to be refunded and assurance that such kind of inconvenience is not faced by anyone.
If you wish to discuss this matter further, please feel free to contact to me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sam Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m Williams and my booking ID: CHW5809B. I recently visited New York for a busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65281631695 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4004169666 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186532363644 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516741638053 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521674801211 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884345757813 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702731843227 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.