The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books.
It is critically important to cherish our experiences in life and past these to new generations. I strongly believe that personal experiences are more valuable than academic wisdom. I will explain in the following essay.
First, personal knowledge cannot be found in books. Academic proficiency is important in life, a person needs to study and prepare himself to face the task force of modern society. But at the same time, a person needs to combine this knowledge with his own experiences. Most of the times these are more valuable than their studies itself. For instance, as a school teacher for more than 10 years, I have come to realize that my college degree prepared me to teach the content, but it did not prepare to relate to young people or parents or administrators or other teachers. Furthermore, I believe that people that are successful at his job is due to the way he/she accommodates his own experiences to the actual job.
Second, a strong personality is more important than academic wisdom. Take, for example, a person with a high degree or studies like a Ph.D. It does not matter how well he knows his subject, if this person cannot communicate or sell his idea he will not be able to find a decent job. So, as I said before, a person needs to feed on his own experiences in order to establish himself as a strong candidate in the modern world. On the contrary, I have met people with very little education, but have obtained success utterly, just by the sheer will of their personality. In addition, these are personalities that put in place and execute beautifully their own experiences when they approach a problem in life
Last, traditional wisdom needs to be preserve. In the old days, when we did not have internet or virtual libraries. The world of the mouth was the wisdom to follow. People used to travel from town to town spreading their own knowledge via oral means a so for. These people were the idols of the past. For example, country music tells stories of travelers and lost love. This music was originally composed and sung by cowboys. Without these strong personalities that put their own experiences in their songs, country music as we know it today would have not existed today.
By way of conclusion, I believe, personal experiences are more value that academic wisdom for the reasons I explained in this short essay
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- TPO-16 - Integrated Writing TaskThe United Kingdom (sometimes referred to as Britain) has a long and rich history of human settlement. Traces of buildings, tools, and art can the from periods going back many thousands of years: from the Stone Age, throug 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76829268293 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69917584972 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50487804878 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6663244127 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8636363636 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217855981019 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653808344088 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632327144805 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124384975562 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278241986961 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.