A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A nation consists of a lot of people, of which a lot of them are students. For their education the certain authority fixated by the nation have to take care of the students for their study so that can build up an educated, strong mindful future nation. The authority should make proper curriculum so that there is no lack in their students eeducation. For some logical reasons, that curriculum should be same for all of the students, so that they can learn same things and choose from those. We can consider a student from a school for analyzing the case more convenient way.
Suppose, there are some students who studies in same class. The curriculum is such that all of the students requires to go through the same syllabus. They all are studying same language course, mathematics, religious studies,social sciences etc. of which everybody may not be interesed in all of the syllabus. Yet, they have to study to survive the semester.
A student is matured enough when he is a senior in high school to feel passionate about any subject and choose his career. But if he/she has to learn all of the subjects, he/ she may loose interest in the topic he/she was interested. That student may not have enough time to study his/ her favourite subjects. When a student finds a subject he/ she is really interested, can spend a lot of time on that subject and become better at that and make it his/ her hobby. But if he/she doesn't get enough time, there is little chance of that student to do that.
There could be some student who is very unterested in biology, want to study about it, but because of common curriculum for all the students, those students have to spend time studying other subjects which are not related to biology. I think at high school senior level, there should be a system where a student can choose his/her favourite topics spend time with it and grow their knowledge. Those students will be better at their corresponding favourite subjects and get to college with more passion then.
I agree partialy with the given statement. Until a stage, students should be gone through a similar curriculum in a nation, but at senior class of high school, they should be given opportunity to choose their subjects. Waiting for them to get to college doesn't look so good as they become matured enough before that age. Though some compulsory topics can be included up to in college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, then, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48933780775 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1472986352 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334462874483 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992737883626 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765631943422 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194991553543 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864855673951 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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