The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no deny that as of today e-commerce websites have rose to significant heights. General public are of the believe that this development would lead to city shop's run out of business permanently. I do not tend to agree with the former statement as there are multiple prespectives that need to be considered before making any such speculations.
On the first hand it needs to be mention that the business is getting impacted due to online shopping by customers. However, people still feel the necessity to have a close look, to touch and to try the product before they make a purchase. So, the local market could never be closed. Additionally, as there is rise in consumption of goods from other mediums of purchase, so local sellers and vendors have also started to make their presence on such websites by selling and operating directly from their physical stores.
On the other hand, there is a slow down of foot traffic in local markets as there are multifarious reasons that people opt for online shopping. Few of which are that it has lot many variety & options to choose from, no traffic and pollution and saves signficantly time when you are sure of what you have to buy. Another reason for reduction in businesses of local market is members of public have no knowledge about which specific item is available in which area of city.
To sum it up, it would be ridiculous to argue the impact of online shopping in the trade. I opine that they will definitely not eradicate small shops and retailers, as customers still buy offline as per their requirement and businesses have now evloved to selling online from a singular location.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...sites have rose to significant heights. General public are of the believe that this developmen...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nificant heights. General public are of the believe that this development would lead to cit...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...cant heights. General public are of the believe that this development would lead to cit...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun variety seems to be countable; consider using: 'many varieties'.
Suggestion: many varieties
...pping. Few of which are that it has lot many variety & options to choose from, no traffic an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81052631579 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666272348 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6268346718 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14697613028 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546913949795 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560216212624 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095067771627 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523581939554 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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