Some people believe that any one can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others thinks that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is always been an issue of debate whether the artistic creations including paintings, poetries etcetera require unique abilities or can be created by an individual. According to me, undoubtedly certain skills are crucial to become a good artist; however, each and every person can do so with relentless toil.
To embark with one side, masses who possess ranging from strong imagination power to write in an expressive way that can straight away readers heart are capable enough to become a painter as well as a poet ,and all these are considered innate. For instance, a famous english poet Shakespeare ancestors used to write with innovative methods. Moreover, one can adopt a career of musician, if the individual understand the notes instantly or create by one's own ,while at the same time one who does not have any knowledge of these things consider it an Uphill battle .Thus, it is necessary to have specific abilities.
On the contrary, it is undeniable that, where there is a will, there is a way. Owing to this people who have immense enthusiasm and passion towards art can be innovative in the fields of their interest. Therefore, despite having any specific abilities in art, they need to engage themselves in round the clock practice to achieve expertise in various areas such as painting, music. To illustrate, as per a survey by Yale University, 50% of the artists revealed that they were completely unaware of even basic skills of drawing and instruments, but have become great artists on account of strong determination and optimism for it.
In conclusion, although all the inherited abilities play a great role in making a person a perfect artist,with the help of hard work any human can create one 's own innovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77749649334 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5204766457 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225076610805 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794745867001 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637645428389 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129265198521 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253977729929 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.