Are famous people treated unfairly by the media?
Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Over the past few years, there has been a rise in media companies by changing the way they do business. Although celebrities worry about their privacy, in fact, they are treated fairly by the media.
First, the media are consists of a diversity of opinions from a lot of people. This gives a variety of information about an issue which means it's clear and quite objective by celebrities'fans, professors, authority. This means that celebrities should be pessimistic about it. In addition, there are some of the laws which banned to protect celebrities. Media companies can't write wrong information about them as they can be sued by the government.
Second, fame and media attention are linked. Celebrities should be known that thanks to these activities they will pay more attention. So, both of them should share the same responsibility. In fact, celebrities should have more responsibility for their privacy. It's just media enterprises' job to give information to the readership.
In conclusion, the pool of media is fair to celebrities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to protect celebrities. Media companies cant write wrong information about them as t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24852071006 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07152462243 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5552981515 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261586242422 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897917556272 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712887025754 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14985858312 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786985282452 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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