Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? Discuss both view and give your opinion.
With the advent of vaccines, it has become quite easier to mitigate severe diseases among children. however, the question arises whether it should be made mandatory for the folks to vaccinate their kids or not. In this essay, we will delve into both these aspects and come to a feasible conclusion.
On one hand, it is quite evident that injecting kids with medicines at a very young age, helps them to develop immune system to fight strong diseases which they can get infected with in future. For instance, viruses like small pox was eradicated only when vaccines were used to treat patients on a larger scale. Moreover, in India, government made it compulsory for the parents to inoculate their children against polio virus which later on, wiped of the disease from the entire country. From the past few instances, it can be deduced that, far better results were obtained related to healthcare when people were obliged to immunize their children.
On the other hand, there are several instances which showed harmful effects of vaccination on the children. According to surveys conducted in rural areas, it was discovered that quality and improper dosage of vaccines led to development of other issues like allergy or rash in kids. Additionally, several activists have argued on the unnatural phenomenon which happens in the body after getting injected with medicines. Obligatory vaccination can create selfishness in doctors and they may turn it into money making business by doing unnecessary vaccinations. parents, by all means, should have the right to know all details and take best decision for their lads.
In my opinion, with ever increasing toxins in our environment, vaccinations are the need of the hour and has helped the society in eliminating deadly infections. however, stricter laws are required so that it should not be misused and conducted by skilled physicians in a well organized way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1891025641 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66429258225 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650641025641 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8433666562 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265216420478 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776215994669 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642239848268 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144702620612 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062422966178 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.