Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
education and job are inevitable requirement for the mankind. Some people believe that obtaining graduation from universities helps in acquiring decent employment, whereas others trusts on doing work and getting experience immediately after school. In this essay both the views will be discussed to reach the hypothesis. paticular area of
The modern world demands individuals with good schooling from reputed culleges or universities which lend a hand to better placement.Every organisations look for skilled employees who have through knowledge and understanding of the specific subject for a fast paced work environment.As an example, pharmaceutical industries seek people procured sufficient educational qualifications from universities so that, the acquired skills and knowledge can be utilized for the improvent in the scientific research and provide better treatment options to patients.Similarly, in engineering sectors and technical oriented jobs companies urges for highly educated workforce to produce a better output. Hence, university education plays a crucial role in acquiring better opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, similarly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15384615385 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46241085873 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74358974359 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 247.984999546 49.4020404114 502% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.0 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188372096595 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877784707642 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739859430082 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151961668 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159921386597 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.98 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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