Some people think that history is one of the most important school subject. Others say that in today's world, subject like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern world, the debatable topic is that, which subject is of utmost importance in today's world. In my opinion, science and technology subject to be preferred over history whilst history subject should not be completely ignored. This essay will discuss both view in subsequent paragraphs.
In this modern world, the debatable topic is that, which subject is of utmost importance in today's world. In my opinion, science and technology subject to be preferred over history whilst history subject should not be completely ignored. This essay will discuss both view in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark on, there are myriad reasons why people think history is the most important subject but this essay will explain only main reason. First and foremost is that, if students will learn history then they can get knowledge about heritage, traditional and take experience from past mistakes which were done by their ancestors. As a result, they will not repeat these mistakes in future and gain moral valuable lessons towards life from that incidents. Secondly, if students have good knowledge about history then they can pursue their career in this field because there are many opportunities which are created by this subject like teachers and so on.
On the other hand, few people think that, future can be made better only with the help of science and technology. Moreover, if children will learn these subjects in school then, these subjects will prove beneficial for them in their further life. In these days people have electronic gadgets which make life convenient. Consequently the life of people is very fast and advance. For instance, in earlier days, when people sent message to someone then it took more time to reach but in present, people give massage to someone in few minutes as well as video calls by the advancement of science and technology.
In epilogue, no doubt, both subjects are equally important so teacher's should teach both subjects to students. According to my prospective, both play vital role to make good future of students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 321, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...nic gadgets which make life convenient. Consequently the life of people is very fast and adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15430267062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51059970607 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489614243323 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1438156944 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343012568955 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113711179418 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758803038312 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215746110632 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885949198765 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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