agree or not agree
Students sometimes need to do homework or some projects during their educational year. In some cases, the professor says to them that they must be a member of a group. Whether or not they like, being a part of the group has its effects on persons. Some people feel that group works are more effective in learning than lonely doing jobs. In my opinion, team-work has many benefits. I believe in this way for couple of reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, first and foremost reason that I feel in this way lies in the belief that work in all types of groups helps the person to cover the teams and people of groups weaknesses which never could be solved by that person solely. It is probable that a member do not know a method or solution to the problem and another one has a comprehensive definition for that subject. For example, I remember that when I was a university freshman, I had a course in the mechanical science. Our professor asked us to make a method which simulates particles movement in air. I did not have any idea about how should use basic concepts in the mechanic to have a precise simulation for this project. I went to visit the professor and he proposed me to be a member of a group who were working in the similar topic. Being with those people helps me to found many ways for managing the project. Anyone in that group has a suggestion which make a new road to reach the goal in the project.
Moreover, working in the group helps people to waste less time. A person has a duty to buy requeirements, another one must make a plan for persons or team and the older man is a manager. It is obvious that in this strategy, time is not critical parameter and by saving that, group can improve the quality of the project. For instance, my father works in the car designing office. In his career, the office gives some special projects about designing a new luxury car. Therefore, any member knows his duties and works on his section. For this reason, every one can have a plan for his outside life. Additionally, he can be a calm and stress-less or in order person. In addition, the company reduces the spending money on extra-hour works because any worker realize that he must do his job very well and in time. So if he do not his work in good way, the project may face a bad result and finally they would lost their job and income.
I do not deny that working alone has a little benefits like, don’t have a concern about others or plan a project based on your favorites. But I am sure that the chance of those kinds of benefits are very small.
In summary, taking account of all reasons that are explained in the essay, we may reach a conclusion that work in the group helps students to learn more and get a better result. The reason who claimed in the essay were: Covering weaknesses, get more suggestions in the group, and wasting little time and using remaining time for enhancing the project.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
... that they must be a member of a group. Whether or not they like, being a part of the group ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 821, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...his job very well and in time. So if he do not his work in good way, the project m...
^^
Line 5, column 907, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ace a bad result and finally they would lost their job and income. I do not deny ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in summary, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44485294118 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43076088515 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487132352941 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4336667215 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3571428571 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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