some people prefer to allow their children to watch TV in any time, others prefer to limit the time for only one hour
discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Nowadays, children spend myriad of time in front of T.V. So, some people think that their children should spend about one hour in front of T.V. While others believe that, it is conventional to take any time in front of T.V. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
In one hand, the majority of people encourage their children to set a little time on T.V just about one hour on the whole day the reason for that the children waist their important time when they sit a lot of time in front of the T.V. For example, numerous children fail in school because they were setting a whole time on T.V then their parents punish them and create a new law which that they should spend an hour on it. Therefore, that is why some people think that the children should not be an enormous time next to T.V
On the other hand, many nations encourage their children to spend any time they want. To illustrate, many people advise their babies to watch T.V because of their children can learn, improve their minds to think quickly and people know their children feel comfortable. Hence, the belief those children should learn from the internet. Hence the belief that it is convention from children sit a numerous of time in front of Y.V.
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both sides, I believe that children should be equivalents among their time, which means a half day for watching T.V while others for their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61627906977 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.228466454 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468992248062 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.641022723 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.5 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368256425841 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200521331056 0.084324248473 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802693861641 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247265380451 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253235905264 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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