Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Government spending on roads is more important than the railways.However both are most essential to be improved just for the better service for people.The government should spend money on which is more important and is causing effect to daily life.
Firstly,i would disagree with the point that railways has to be spent more money than that of roads with both the needs for railways and roads. For the improvement of railways would be either the tracks or the availability of trains and maximum the quality of food.They should estimate the number of people who are using railways for means of transport according to which the money can be utilized.For example few cities in India most of the population travel on trains for work and it is always busy that in mornings so they came up plan with increasing the trains in mornings and gradually reducing when not in peak hours or if needed new tracks can be added but whereas cities in hilltops developing the railways by spending lot of money is no use.
Secondly,the roads are primary source of transport.Even to reach a station the main mode is travel on road to travel in the train.If the roads are not developed one major problem would be water clogging during rains and even then the government neglects the roads can form holes and even walking on such roads can be difficult.However due to increase in population if everyone starts driving cars then roads would be jammed and cause delays.The government can additionally widen the roads to make travel easier and also required precautions when floods occur.In few Europe countries people usually don't prefer to using railways so the government completely stopped working on improvement of it and focused more on roads.
In the conclusion,i would say that government of any state before spending money on either of the two it has to analyse which is more important and requires more attention need to be developed according to the number of people depending and which can be more benefited to people in their daily life and improvise it.Government spending on roads is more important than the railways.However both are most essential to be improved just for the better service for people.The government should spend money on which is more important and is causing effect to daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95595854922 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7882159707 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435233160622 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.536994653 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.6 106.682146367 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.2 20.7667163134 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172961912733 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130141995619 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524124488602 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127293870904 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441677296191 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.5 13.0946893788 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 11.3001002004 284% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.