some people prefer to gain information from their experience. others prefer to gain information from books
discuss both sides and give your opinion
Human being acquire the information throughout the entire life .some people could argue that it is better for a person to gain the information from his experience. However, in my view, reading books and understanding the contents is ultimately better.
Experience the life it might be good way to learn information especially for those who find reading such boring. According to new study, those who got high scores in university last year prefer experience their own lives rather than read books. Furthermore, experience the life is not just to obtain information but it is to get many life skills as well as learn many things in life. For example, you cannot learn driving by books until you take car and drive. So experience the life might be for people who hating reading.
Read books to get knowledge is preferred and the efficient way for different kinds and different ages of people. Simply person can obtain nation`s culture just by reading book or even some books. As an example, before I traveled to Egypt I was reading about their culture so I easily adapted with their culture and customs. Moreover, person should read before experience the things because, at least, to reduce the risks. Hence, reading is more efficient to get knowledge than experience.
In conclusion, I believe that, all things are considered, we have to read about things as much as we can before experiencing it. So it is undeniable that acquire knowledge from experience is more bitter and ultimately superior
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, at least, even so, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71536669681 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3031151383 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174568290503 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594308314703 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707976514187 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115423884994 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858873126803 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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