spending money by government

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spending money by government

Submitted by manraj123 on Fri, 12/13/2019 - 05:20

The importance of spending money government on basic need which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it was beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential in recent years. In my opinion the letter proposition appears to be more rational. This easy will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but more preponderant on stems from the fact that government should invest money in improving medical technology .Consequently, they should indulge in upgrading their education sector become it is considered as the base of overall development of a particular country. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that money as possible on developing, innovation, science. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial is that science and technology is very important other people think that this money spent on more basic need. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of some people think that governments should as much money as possible on developing, innovations, science and technology other people are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27685950413 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84336257692 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.6430361363 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198265838322 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668857267925 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789979347665 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11726390724 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349461844521 0.0609392437508 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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