Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will
give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the
work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career? Give reasons for
your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Choosing career has never been an easy choice to make. There are several factors and parameters that people take in consideration while opting career; but some common factors are like social status and salary or desired career where people enjoy while working. I found both aspects correct but give edge to making choice on basis of interest where person finds joy in work.
People who are ambitious and looking for stream where they can earn high salary and maintain class of social status. Such folks may land up in a situation where they feel pressure or uninterest in profession. But same time when they see they are earning more money and enjoying good social status feels satisfied. As their whole sole moto to choose profession is meeting.
On Other hand where aspirants opt the career path where they have interest and feels good; can never found themselves reluctant in their profession. Such people can contribute great in their respective fields. for example, here in India there is a poet who earlier got admission in an engineering college then dropped out and starts his career in writing poetry now he is a well-known poet and has won many national and international awards.
In conclusion, I am in favor of opting career where one has interest; it helps them in living satisfactory life as well as they can make good contribution in respective field. However, sometimes circumstances don't allow and it becomes necessary to opt career which gives good salary is also an acceptable scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98814229249 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56158198397 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1998263886 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250333539809 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917827374875 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585061837203 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152445940668 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521700592905 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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