It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents , for instance for sports or music , and others are not . However , it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician .
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
It is argued that generally few people come to this world with god gifted brain in different activities while sometime it is derive that any one can learn to become a better sportsman or artist in their childhood . In this essay I would shed light on both notion and give my own point of view .
On one hand , there are number of kids who have natural ability of sportsmanship . such as , cricket is a sport which every one like to play , but few of them look like they are born for cricket because the way they play this game is like expert . Similarly , some of them are attractive towards music . For instance , the instrument that they play in their childhood are look professional that a better performer can't play like them . Another thing is singing , some kiddies love to sing a song and they sung better than the professional singer because of their natural voices .
On the other hand , I would rather argue that every kid who want to get skills can be a valuable sports or music player . if a child teach from a sports coach and an instructor taught him advance techniques then one can easily become an excellent sports person . In particular , if parents hire a cricket instructor for their kid to teach him some tactics of cricket then he can easily get how to play because childhood are fresh minded and can pick up the thoughts quickly . Furthermore , some juvenile are love to be a music master , but they can't until they get some tactics from a musical educator . For example , if a toddler love music and want to learn how to play that instrument then he must do hard work to overcome this .
In conclusion , after discussing both ideas i come to the point that hard working is the main thing from which a person can turn into whatever he wants to be regardless of natural abilities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, similarly, so, then, while, another thing, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56832298137 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41084497814 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0901188143 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253161596141 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838237268782 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505854736481 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134908127471 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546097391845 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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