Undoubtedly, human genetics has an imperative role in define the character of an individual even though it can be redefining with good mindset of the person as well as the society where he involved in his life especially the time, he spends his younger stage.
Life is precious gift from the almighty God, when a birth of child, he does not know anything in this world and gradually character develops the care and support he or she gets from parents and siblings, subsequently he or she shows it based on the genetical and the way he grow the situation whether it is bad or good. If a child born from the criminal background parents certainly, he will prove it in his childhood itself, but it can be changeable here is the role of our society and educational system although government also must take a lead to develop a meaningful generation with awesome personality for a bright future.
For instance, there are uncountable number of individual born in a streets and unprotected situation where they will be harmful to the society and nation but, they become famous and role model of everyone who can imitate their lifestyle and some of them are providing shelter and livelihood for those who born in this world and their parents are left away. Our educational system also motivates the students how to improve the personality and being a human in our day to day life.
To conclude, nothing is unchangeable keeping harmony and peaceful world we need to protect and educate the each and every child who born in this earth.
- Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education whereas others say this is no longer true discuss these views and opinion 73
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your 61
- Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work while others oppose as it may affect their career Discuss both the sides and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples 84
- Educating Young People Is Naturally Important However Some Think Governments Ought To Invest More In Education For Adults 84
- Children watch Tv more these days compared to the past.is it positive or negative development. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...t based on the genetical and the way he grow the situation whether it is bad or good...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75939849624 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67079268867 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9188638265 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 211.0 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.3333333333 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160692623242 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896465470104 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062709369201 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936554922177 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366929033096 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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