Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want excitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Travel agents working in travel companies have an opinion that people’s preferences for holidays are changing gradually. The travellers choose trips that include adventurous activities rather than laid-back trips. In my opinion, I do believe that this trend of choosing extreme adventurous holidays is emerging as people are curious to experience new things and challenge themselves.
Now a day’s people plan their itineraries that involves thrilling activities as are interested in trying new things which Is not only out of their comfort zone but also can boast about them in front of their friends and family and build a competent image and respect. Moreover, people are excited to do challenging and energizing things as this gives them the feeling of confidence and self-achievement. When they are able to daring things on holidays makes them feel proud of themselves.
Furthermore, people plan for active holidays to exercise, to stimulate the brain and to learn new physical activities away from the everyday pressures and commitments that might get in the way at home. Outdoor activity not only results in a significantly greater improvement in mental wellbeing, feeling more connected to nature, cleaner air, and providing a significant vitamin-D boost, but also lead to improved mood, self-esteem and higher energy levels. To elucidate, holidays including activities such as hiking and bush walking helps them to gain more confidence and patience for uncertain and unfamiliar events which not only enhances their overall personality and lead to success in future but also will improves their social and decision-making skills.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that people prefer to organise their holidays including challenging and exciting events which takes them out of your familiar world as well as they can fearlessly perform them with a great deal of fun, excitement and adrenaline rush
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing of confidence and self-achievement. When they are able to daring things on holid...
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Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...lead to success in future but also will improves their social and decision-making skills...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l of fun, excitement and adrenaline rush
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95922629393 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0565579027 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.8 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578367776355 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305183794025 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340867322016 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408577344515 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378244904225 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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