Nowadays, Families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have been used to this. Why is this happening?
family plays a vital role in today's world. family is important because it keeps people's bodies and minds healthy. On the other hand, family relationships can sometimes play an important role in our stress. The present essay aims to discuss that the advantages of family relationships emulate its disadvantages.
it is often suggested that the family relationships is beneficial for two main reasons. For one thing, family relationships provide social support for people. For instance, family members can help solve other family members' problems. Another things is that family relationships are excellent way to feel happy. As an illustration, people can spend their leisure times with family and experience happy times.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to family relationships. In the first place, family members take responsibility for other family members, and sometimes this responsible put pressure on others. An example may help clarify the point. when there is a problem in family, all member of family become involved in problem, and this may cause a lot of stress in family. In the second place, when people are with their families, they have less freedom than when they are living alone. All in all, family relationships sometimes lead to limitation for people.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspect of family relationships, I personally believe that its upside is mor significant than its downside. To support my opening i would like to offer two basic arguments. Firstly, Doctor Anderson the head of psychology department at Michigan university claims that family relationships will make family members comfortable and prosperous. In Japan, family relationships have mad people happy and prosperous. The latest figures released by world health Organization (W.H.O) reveal that about 70 percent of countries forget important role of family relationships. In other words, in many countries the important role of family relationships have been overlooked.
To sum up, it has been observed that the role of family relationships for individuals' welfare cannot be ignored. However, the question is: can family relationships improve the health and happiness of mankind, in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, the role of family relationships in maintaining individuals' health has increased in recent years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, so, another thing, for instance, in general, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50546448087 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0456626202 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5466673099 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9583333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197604945074 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642005547907 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416787940572 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117965667245 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036014191806 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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