Food travels thousands of miles from farm to customers. Some people believe we should buy food from the local farmer to protect the environment and support the local business. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Naturally, aliments producing in farm reach in the hand of end-users after travelling many kilometers. Some people think that if we want to preserve the atmosphere as well as the local economy, we ought to purchase sustenance from the local suppliers itself. It has both pros and cons. I believe that such a tendency is more advantageous because it is helpful not only to any individual but also to the nation.
Proponents of local farm products cite a host of benefits. Firstly, if people buy food from the local vendors around us, persons involved in this business will get its economic benefits advantages. As a result, it will enhance not only the local economy but also the overall market condition as the money will rotate there itself. Secondly, people will get a chance to consume fresh supplements even at reasonable rates since food from sites will reach to the local market within short durations along with lesser transportation cost eventually, common men’s monthly budget would also improve.
On the contrary, many people do not support this view of eating local food due to many drawbacks. Principally, as farmers use the higher amount of pesticides in order to increase the production of food, nowadays, which is directly consumed by customers, such food is a direct threat to public health. Besides, they feel low when they want to add new eatables in their diet, and they are unable to do so because markets are full of local foods itself, therefore, they have to rely on limited food options.
To conclude, undoubtedly, our prime focus must be on supporting local farmers if we want to save the environment and the local market as such a phenomenon has a large number of effective pros compared to disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in short, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99317406143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71767952721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7339244063 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371431215586 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117466468493 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068726195052 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200011064498 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232143017069 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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