Many people believe that the internet has made life easier for most people . However, others fear that it might also represent a threat . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Majority of people opine that internet has made our life easier and comfortable,whilst others consider that internet is jeopardise for human beings. I favour the latter perspective; however,my essay shall dwell upon both the perspectives in the later paragraphs followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, due to development of technology internet has been used by masses at larger scale. Even though it had made the life of people easier , negatives of internet cannot be ignored. Firstly,in the modern era masses depend largely on internet to solve their problems. Due to this, they cannot use their ideas and imagination. When people rely on internet then they are not be able to solve his own difficulties of their own. Furthermore, nowadays each person use the internet to show their identity in social sites . Owing to this, they may fall into risk . For instance, several people show their real identity and profession in different sites namely Instagram, Facebook and Twitter. Though they know that by showing their identity they fall into trouble, they show their personal information . There is greater chance that victims hack the site of person to commit offensive.
On the other hand, some people oppose the trend because they believe that internet has made their life effortless. Due to internet people search every information fastly without waste their time and internet also increase the knowledge of each person. Internet provide knowledge related to every aspect whether it is technology , global country and locations of different sites. Moving furthermore, by using internet people do not have to sit idle . They entertain themselves by watching movies, discoveries channels and comedy shows. For example, American study shows that children who use internet have greater knowledge than those who do not take advantage of internet.
In conclusion, according to my view Internet is menace for the lives of people because it do not hide the privacy of masses and it also put the life of people in danger. Although, internet has some advantages but disadvantages of internet are far higher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28402366864 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73930389519 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2876137242 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258966305723 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849875678763 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874508027182 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195390020521 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535652319514 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.