In this cutting edge era, the internet is countries’ milestone and transferring information according to state-of-the-art tools is widespread in the globe as we can see the large number of firms communicate with each other online in some cases like meetings, conferences and trainings. This essay will take a close look at both benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon before demonstrate that the merits could be outweighed demerits.
On the one hand, technology and internet brings about myriad opportunities helping human being to work faster and besides not only does the internet provide a better circumstances, but also helps people to save their money and time. When people want to hold a meeting a conference hall must be prepared and they have to travel long distance to participate in; furthermore, online communication could be the most significant part of using the internet preserving the environment indirectly. For instance, individuals do not have to commute thus, the fewer means of transport, the less pollution.
On the other hands, undoubtedly nowadays sedentary lifestyle is very conventional due to people work more convenient at their home so most of the immobility related diseases have become prevalent like obesity, stress and depression. To be precise when individuals spend most of their time behind their computers they never care about themselves so that the amount of depression and eye disease is said to rise among people working more at home with computer.
In conclusion, it is true that steady online conversation has some negative effect but when internet is dominant over these recent decades it will enhance the level of communication all over the world and also affect positively on environment indirectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36462093863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06351246596 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2929696822 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.75 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836545770388 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370914210824 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350944975358 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435955283842 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326336207763 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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