People today are spending more and more time outside of the home. What are the reasons for this trend? What effects is it having on individuals and society?
Nowadays, most people spend their time outside the home because of globalization and urbanization. This trend is mainly due to long working hours and spending their time on leisure activities, which has affected both - individual as well as society.
It is a fact that most companies have to survive in the competitive market, which compels them to increase the number of working hours by giving overtime to their employees, which means that most employees spend most of their time outside and work a long time in the offices to achieve the target of the company. Moreover, many people have taken the membership in the clubs, the ticket prices of the cinema have been reduced, and most merchandises give offers to their customers, resulting to spend their weekend on such places rather than spending at home.
These causes have severely affected individuals and society. In terms of the individuals, if they worked longer time at the office, not only would it affect their health but on their family. For instance, in China, it has found that 85% of employees who are working for a long time have the dearth of sleep, stress, and unhealthy family relationship. In terms of society, the entertainment industry and hospitality industry create several jobs in the market, which allows the youngsters to have a decent job for survival in the market and a valuable experience after studies.
In conclusion, remaining outside from home due to working for a longer time cause health issues and poor family relationship on an individual, whereas, spending leisure time outside rather than be at home on the weekend allows an entrepreneur to create job opportunities in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s, which has affected both - individual as well as society. It is a fact that most compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05776173285 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74581801804 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.213177791 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219004064723 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10726966885 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505292744609 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154283716251 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430213434868 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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