The young people in the workforce are changing their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, employees have a tendency to switch professions in a yearly basis and many believe that this has a beneficial impact on their income and the company. In this essay, I will describe several reasons of this alternation and explain why this has more merits than demerits.
Firstly, they are changing for a better opportunity and salary. Youngsters in the modern and developed society are highly competitive, they are trained to become qualified and competent workers. However, newly graduated students are inexperienced and will not be capable of competing against former employees. Subsequently, they have to endure a low payment for the first few years. After a required amount of time, they will discover chances and a position that matches their effort. A recent survey announced that 81% of young individuals decided to switch to a different job or career because they feel they are underappreciated in the former profession.
Secondly, these young workers wanted fresh experience and fields. In a psychological perspective, most enjoyed alternation more than stability. As a result, people easily get tired of performing the same activity and wanted to be exposed to a different career.
In regards to the advantages, this action enhances their ability, therefore, affecting society development. People who are imprisoned in the same position cannot liberate and execute new ideas. For instance, a researcher working in a former, repetitive protocol will find it harder to develop solutions and findings. Moreover, the alternation of professional fields encourages workers to find their aptitude and the position that they can truly excel. This helps the society to eliminate incompetent employees and acquire passionate, sufficient workers for the field.
In conclusion, regarding the two factors that influence young workers’ decision, it is more advantageous to change professions in a certain amount of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...be exposed to a different career. In regards to the advantages, this action enhances th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57912457912 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06616638113 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9870215896 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992258656804 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300744346506 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251425405371 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541359717965 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191395200712 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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