The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
every well functional organization is based of leader who have a good knowledge and well understood back round about the business he or she is running. it is often thought, that a director of the organization or the business will be led by an older persons. This essay will argue why not only older people but also younger generation can lead a business.
we can find that many companies are led by older people. As the older people have more work experience and wider range of skills, they have better understanding of the field than younger competitors. If the organization falls to crises then fast act is necessary all those vise knowledge and skill experience cant turn crises to profit. For example, in 2008 market crush Estonia t-shirt company was falling apart. founder of company was directed by older gentleman . he decided to sell everything and that was a smart move. Over 70 precent of different organisations bankrupted. Acknowledging the fact of bankrubcy he saved thousonds of euros. All the credit goes to very smart and wise leader who bought same store up after ressacion with half price he sold it.
Even though older people have more knowledge they tend to stick to old patterns and ways. Today modern world is involving very fast and to keep up with tempo it is necessary to have leaders who can adapt fast with the changing envaierment. old ways do not work no more and are replaced with ideals. The way we used to communicate and market our business is drastically changed. For example, two companies witch sold watches, had totally different ways to market their products. older company was founder may years before, but director of company was old man with old ways. With the rise of internet shopping, one young man tried the luck and opened online store witch sellsed watches. Within three years hes business was two times more profitable than the older wiser man with old ways.
new Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">To conclude the fact that modern world needs persons who can keep up with the tempo. More then often those are young persons with new ideas and ways. I do not fully agree that every successful company need old and vise leader, sometimes what we need is young person with new ideas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09921671018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.70195687321 2.80592935109 168% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537859007833 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7724149449 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9130434783 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04347826087 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198408446899 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544334533919 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538674440002 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128525326475 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058716075886 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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