Childhood is the best time to nurture a child's mind towards a good person. During this time it shapes them to be a better social person. Few people belives that this guidance can be given to the kids at home. However, others think that this are responsibilities of school to teach them. This essay will discuss why parental cares are more important than school.
School is the best place to learn and grow as a good personality. Therefore, the academic part of a person's life plays a vital role in one's life. These institutions not only teaches you the books and syllabus but also give the directions to become successful. This students responsibility to feel the urge and follow the guidelines. But, as there are many students in a particular class or section, it is really a challenge to give full attention to every student. Moreover, schools and colleges are supposed to be more focused on your educational skills.
Parents play a major role in shaping a child's future. A kid goes to school after a certain period of time, however, they start learning the behavior imitating their parents from every beginning. So, it is the responsibilities of both guardians to teach them the ways of how to behave with others. For example, we can see a lot of children who are very intelligent but do not respect others. Many of the time, if we check their childhood, would found that parents were unable to give adequate time to shape them up due to their busy life.
Personal behavior is the first thing that defines the quality of a person. This essay has discussed why school teaching is not enough to shape up a person's life to a good person. In my opinion, parents are the first and the best teachers to guide children to be nice in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tion to take care of every single child in a similar way. According to a survey, working parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58090185676 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56794066232 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405835543767 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9443754415 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308968011687 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112926788729 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800354551463 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217371357291 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924927176669 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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