Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
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</p><p class="MsoNormal">In modern times, people are interested in the modernization
of all parts of life. Some people believe that the historical buildings, which
are under the protection of law, should be reconstructed in order to modernize
them. This essay will show the importance of these buildings and provide some
arguments that they have beneficial for our progression.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal">Generally speaking, there is a wide range of reasons why the
existence of monumental building is extremely important for us. Perhaps the
main reason why people are in favour of this is because these buildings reflect
our past. Today, there are countries which have thousands of years old history.
These countries allow their people to know their cultural backgrounds. People
in these countries teach the history to the children and also these children
will teach that to their children. As a result, these cultural recollections
can become a cultural heritage. Furthermore, this approach may provide the
cultural and national integrity to people. Secondly, the areas where historical
buildings stand give some opportunity to local people to earn money. These
people usually depend on the money which they earned from the tourism revenue.
If these buildings will be replaced by new buildings, it is highly likely that
they might face with money issues and stop running their businesses.
Furthermore, they will probably have to leave from their homes to find a job.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal">There are also benefits of historical structures to the
modern world. Some people claim that these monuments cannot help the
development progress of us. Whereas, in most modern country, the sewage systems
have been designed by using the Roman’s designs, which the Romans had gained
the knowledge to design it thousands of years ago. This is a good illustration
why the history gives us opportunity to move forward and improve our knowledge.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
</p><p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, the idea that modernization of the historical
buildings is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I
believe that these buildings and the historical heritage provided by them have
undeniably positive effects on the world and people. If humans had not had a
sense of the cultural integrity, our kind might not have existed in today as
developed as we are.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2621.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.80779220779 5.12529762239 133% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.66176600671 2.80592935109 237% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.031210499 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.611111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20914704294 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761024507312 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477240194274 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642518010213 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422227783343 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.22 12.4159519038 179% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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