Parents should be held responsible for their children's acts. what is your opinion? support it with personal examples.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is parents are held responsible for their children act. As, such, both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that latter outdo the former.
there are a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant is that children are like sponge they absorb and imitate what they absorb from their parents. parents play a vital role in correcting their children and teaching them a good ethics. Needless to say, all these have a far-reaching potential impact on society, each life.
there are , however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of something. Primarily, children's do absorb many things from outside their family example from their friends, school etc. So it is not only parent's are responsible for their behavior but the social institutions plays an equal role in building healthy citizen.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can end that despite some despite some drawbacks, the parents are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1207.87684729 74% => OK
No of words: 174.0 242.827586207 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15517241379 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55550626 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 379.143842365 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6052960159 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217549025219 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076859738713 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779053504188 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120269361818 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604117661495 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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