The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
some opinions said that the free international travel and popular of mass media have made it more feasible for people to know the life of other people in other countries. This issue have some advantages and disadvantage but the benefit seem to dominate the drawback.
it is ovious that in the digital age, we can have face time call to communicate with people at long distance than in the past. Everybody now all know how to travel on budget so travel to foreign countries is no longer a problem. but everything has 2 faces. The developement of mass media take us the chance to meet our friends realistically and not so many people can afford international travel. However it will more convenient to access to others life through phones due to our busy life.
In general, the popular of international travel and mass media have many advantages in mordent life despite some drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81699346405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71530675403 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2410419714 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379150971099 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141750438251 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121834063241 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260723881274 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993798229419 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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