It is more important for school children to learn local history than world history? Agree or disagree?
History play crucial role to know the past of nation or world. It is more essential for learners to learn local history than world history. I am not in favor of above statement I will critique the reasons in ensuing paragraphs with pertinent examples.
World history is imperative. Students get the extra knowledge about outside country what is more, they are able to know the sacrifice done by other regions for freedom. Moreover, they get idea about the ruling methods , their rules and regulations their constitution extra. For instance, world war -1 and world war -2 to know this one should know the history of other kingdoms too. World's history play vital role. Overall, teaching world history in primary and secondary class is much beneficial.
Local history does not include out of nation information or facts. So many times it happens pupil feel lack of data. Juveniles are unaware about the world that what it was or how it was in the past, and how much it developed till now by,which fundamental steps.For example, students learning local history in INDIA is unknown towards French Revolution and Hiroshima bomb attack in japan.
To conclude ,I ricapitulate although local history is imperative for learners, world 's history is more essential and interesting for learners to learn innovative thing about past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11926605505 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58637005559 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.9778992906 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411949457439 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173126434393 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14265675674 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283645557153 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701613694915 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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