Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?
Nowadays people put huge effort to have a flourishing career as well as a contented personal life. However, they are facing a hard time to maintain a good balance between two. this essay shall discuss these problems and some of its remedies.
one of the major problems is growing competition in this fast-paced world. Youngsters are facing huge competition at workplace. In order to stay ahead of the competition, they are expected to work very hard. Moreover, everyone is chasing money, individuals are just overwhelming themselves by doing overtime, working on their day off. hence, they do not have enough time to spend with thier families. Digging deeper, unhealthy lifestyle and eating habits are also causing health problems leading to unhappiness in an individual and make it hard to balance daily routine tasks and hence causing stress and anxiety in people.
There are number of solutions to this problem. people need to learn effective time management. they need to dedicate some time to their families and personal life apart from their job. one has to leave all the workplace stress at work, so it will not affect their personal relationships. Secondly, people should practice mindfulness, yoga or should do some exercises to reduce their stress. According to a survey, people who do some sort of stress relieving activities are happier as compare to others who do not practice any such activities. family members should also help each other, should have mutual understanding, so that person is getting all the motivation from home rather than getting pressurized to live up to someone's expectation.
Summing up, I believe that numerous facts are leading to stressful life, but one should always try to balance their work life and work life to live a happy and successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13945578231 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70625420788 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9919477396 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8823529412 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173710725556 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614075627394 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513062555248 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112302195625 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338600392187 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.