Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:
– Explain what caused the damage.
– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
– What needs to be done to fix it?
Hi Jay,
Hope everything goes well. I am writing this letter to ask you if you could fix the window of my room.
I think you know that the last Sunday, there is a terrible storm in the town. Unfortunately, the window of my room was damaged due to the strong storm. it was lucky that when the window was broken, I was working in my office, and nobody injured by those broken glasses.
As you know, the window is just above my bedhead, and right now I just use a piece of wood to cover the whole of the window. it is winter time, so I am just asking you to fix the window for me by any chance. In fact, the cold wind also blows into the room, and I believe that also influences the heating system and may cost more on the gas fee.
I think it just needs a simple replacement for the broken one. Please fix it as soon as possible.
Thanks,
Hao Jiang,
Best Regard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...om was damaged due to the strong storm. it was lucky that when the window was brok...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... wood to cover the whole of the window. it is winter time, so I am just asking you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, i think, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12865497076 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11786352686 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1820599605 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1818181818 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143569265883 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554958354932 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471849714336 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979627275883 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291233667993 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.