Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
In recent years, climate change becomes more important than other issues. Many reasons can be given to explain this phenomenon which necessitates the implementation of appropriate measures to address it.
There are several factors leading to the fact that the general temperature of our world is increasing rapidly. To begin with, burning fossil fuels is one of the main sources which affects directly to the ozone layer. Industrial areas nowadays can not purify the emission of carbon dioxide effectively so that when gas, charcoal and oil are burnt in order to create energy, they deteriorate not only the people living nearby but also the environment. In addition, responsibility also belongs to our community because of a lack of awareness that we have been protected by trees. Deforestation for wooden furniture and housing area is not a good choice when it comes to construction. Due to the necessity of human's facilities, we are cutting-down our "guards" which are the ones that balanced the world's climate for billions years.
Various measures can be taken to redress the situation. The authorities should restrict the exploitation of natural resources such as wood and plant new ones contemporary. This move can not show its effect instantly but in the future, those new tress will grow and have a tremendous influence by replacing carbon dioxide with oxygen. Starting some campaigns related to protecting environment is needed in schooling because youngsters will take our place as a group to run this world. If we can raise the awareness of our children early, they may use it as a purpose in life combined with new technology to slow down global warming.
In conclusion, although climate change results from many causes, steps can be taken to alleviate this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 805, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...s; which are the ones that balanced the worlds climate for billions years. Various ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94039883404 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3343756726 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095117836355 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031143555888 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231891572978 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514379289193 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269706686753 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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