TPO 52
Our solar system contains from many asteroids. Many experts though that we can colonize the asteroids to live and work is the best option for a couple of reasons. The professor, however, argues that reasons.
Although asteroids have low gravity which is helping the spaceship to land and make it easy for the spaceship to take off again, the professor explains that it will represent some risks. Low gravity will affect on health, for example, it will decrease bone density and lower muscle mass even for a few months. Moreover, on long term, they will have more health problems.
Even though asteroids have valuable metals which is rarely on Earth, the professor discusses that you don’t see the whole picture. You have to consider a certain factors, for example, the cost of support and transfer of that metals will be high. In addition, there is no guarantee that price of the metal will remain the same.
Despite the fact that asteroids would be easy to reach because they come within Earth's orbit, the professor claims that some orbits come closer then move far away from the Earth. They don't stay closer, they can travel away and getting back from that far it will be challenge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... represent some risks. Low gravity will affect on health, for example, it will decrease b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they will have more health problems. Even though asteroids have valuable met...
^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closer than'?
Suggestion: closer than
... professor claims that some orbits come closer then move far away from the Earth. They dont...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...sor claims that some orbits come closer then move far away from the Earth. They dont...
^^^^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...then move far away from the Earth. They dont stay closer, they can travel away and g...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84390243902 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21048283963 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7190486008 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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