Mothers play a key role in the upbringing of children. But in recent times both parents are getting busy with their professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?
Women have a major role in bringing the child to this earth but with time both progenitors are busy because of their hectic life schedule. So, there has been continuous debate among many couples about taking care of their children. In this essay, I will have my opinion about the solution to this problem.
To start with, they should look after children according to their schedule. What I mean by above statement is both couples managed their time to take care of their children according to their working period. For instance, my aunty work in the morning, as a part-time job, and uncle in the day time and they managed to take care according to their free time. Also if they are busy and do not have time, having a day job, they could hire working persons in their house to take care of them. Take, for example, research shows that more than 80 % of people in the UK hire working personnel in their homes for their children.
Moreover, they could also put them in hostels to enjoy their working life. For instance, many people in Nepal have being keeping their children in child caring homes for their studies. This will reduce the burden about their children, which will adhere to get their children better development.
To recapitulate, both parents have equal responsibility to take care of their children and if they are not able to manage their time they have to search alternative solutions to take of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...take care according to their free time. Also if they are busy and do not have time, ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... alternative solutions to take of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i mean, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73895582329 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31206920312 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5140562249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9161547873 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315103331655 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139213772895 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600456945825 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216433156823 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227125535749 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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