As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that companies are responsible for society as well as pursuing their profit. I totally agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
The main reason why I agree with the view that businesses have a responsibility to society is that they can affect people’s life significantly. This means that products that are produced by companies can change people’s behavior and sometimes endanger human life. One good example is manipulating smartphones while driving. It has been a serious social problem in recent years because it causes many fatal traffic accidents. It is also possible to say that people are forced to live a busy life due to advanced technology developed by companies. In the past, people lived at a much slower pace before the advent of the Internet, while nowadays, many workers always have to check emails and reply to it quickly.
The second reason is that businesses also have an enormous effect on people’s health. This is because some products can be harmful to health. For the past few years, the number of patients with some diseases, such as straight neck syndrome or cataract, caused by heavy smartphone usage has been increasing significantly. This unfavorable trend results from corporate activities pursuing their profit and ignoring the possible detrimental effect on customers’ health. If companies had developed their products and called users’ attention to health risks in a responsible way, they could have prevented this situation from developing.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that companies have social responsibility because they can have a significant influence on people’s life and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible way" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31060606061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85459330527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9105544987 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156256449453 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602541147162 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066461001911 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114188690056 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279681575378 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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