Essay topics: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for where you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Ria,
Hope you are doing well. It was so delighted as you agreed to tack care of my house and pet during my vacation. Actually, being worried about my pet that who will assist her during that time, after hearing your words felt so relaxed. Indeed, my pet is also habituated to you it makes me relief. My pets name is chocki, hope you were aware of his name.
We have planned to go nearby place Ontario. That too for 3 days only. Again, we will be back on Thursday. I have kept all the belongings like food and clothes of chocki in the living room. Thought, it would be comfort for you to manage. At the same time, I kept the trash bin near kitchen door. Please keep the trash outside so that the cleaning people will take it the morning time. If you want to contact me during those days, you can call me to my number. In case it does not work you can make a call to the hotel reception we stay, that is Holiday Inn and its number is 7987653566.
Thanking you for your kindness.
Best wishes,
Daniel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ria, Hope you are doing well. It was so delig...
^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...3566. Thanking you for your kindness. Best wishes, Daniel.
^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g you for your kindness. Best wishes, Daniel.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23195876289 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05346876726 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9028214731 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.3125 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.125 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219832355274 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713061875643 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790375319509 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200227709725 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090203362864 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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