In your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them ?
It is argued about who is responsible for one's career selection. While some people believe that it is the parents' duty to determine children's profession. Others criticise this thought, and therefore, consider that everyone is accountable for deciding his future. In my opinion, I agree with the second thesis, which states that you are in charge of your life, whatever the circumstances. This essay expresses why it is the individual responsibility and if it is not parents responsibility, so what should parents do?
Life needs more motivation that requires more passion for overcoming obstacles which require a lot of effort. Accordingly, higher levels of dedication should be reached. That is why everyone should decide to choose which alternative based on his options. For instance, each athletic overcome his obstacles because he has decided to follow this path no matter how it will cost?
However, Parents should provide guidance. As a result of being more experienced due to their significant vision compared with their sons, they should, consequently, support their children with discovering themselves, practising different hobbies, and increasing their ability to determine their requirements. For example, they should encourage their children by participating in music, sport, etc. Since childhood, they should provide them with the necessary experience to determine what children's are preferred. Thus, parents should share their responsibility although children are the main responsible for their career.
To sum up, everyone is ultimately responsible for his career selection and profession. I am a supporter of this point of view. Carefully, parents share guidance to their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... responsible for ones career selection. While some people believe that it is the pare...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...hile some people believe that it is the parents duty to determine childrens profession....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62256809339 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05826674823 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2693093269 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387263453779 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111417841816 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817963300893 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190705980908 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973074248976 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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