Do you agree or disagree with the following?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
In recent times, friends play a crucial role in people's life. Many people thus, propose that it is a tremendous opportunity if one has friends that will make life more meaningful to them. I disagree with the idea that it is more necessary to keep your old friends instead of associating with new buddy. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, making new friends will help to be exposed to new things. Indeed, the old dude will always do things using an archaic method. There are some new ideas that one's old friend may not have which is important and more valuable to people's life. However, making new buddy might help getting the latest and newest information that one needs for revolution. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. The moment I gained admission into university, I forgot about my old friends that we finished secondary school together and mingled with another group of people. These new friends of mine enlightened me and show me the modern way of doing things like mode of dressing, attending night club party. This I never experienced in my life with my old friends and this made me enjoy my campus life without any regret. Therefore, making new friends will help to innovate new ideas and be updated.
Secondly, associating with new friends that don’t know your past experience will make you feel free. Certainly, your old friend will know more or all about one's secret. This can make people to always feel depressed or worried because of their past. Nevertheless, making new friends will surely erased all one's shame because they will not have clue of whatever has happened in the past. For instance, one of my friends in school narrated her story to me when she was in village. She told me how she was impregnated by her teacher and the man rejected the pregnancy and how she was mocked by her friends in the village. That's why she left the village for city where she met me and we became a good friend. If she didn't tell me the story I will never know anything of such has occurred to her in the past.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, it is not necessary to keep our old friends because the new friends will make us to be exposed and will not know about our past experience
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- Do you agree or disagree with the followng statement People learn things better from those at their own level such a fellow students or co wokers than those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 73
- The different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960 1980 and 2000
- Do you agree or disagree with the following It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...e. However, making new buddy might help getting the latest and newest information that ...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...g with new friends that don’t know your past experience will make you feel free. Certainly, you...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... old friend will know more or all about ones secret. This can make people to always ...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'erase'
Suggestion: erase
...theless, making new friends will surely erased all ones shame because they will not ha...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'clued'.
Suggestion: clued
...l ones shame because they will not have clue of whatever has happened in the past. F...
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Line 4, column 619, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...s mocked by her friends in the village. Thats why she left the village for city where...
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Line 4, column 705, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...she met me and we became a good friend. If she didnt tell me the story I will neve...
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Line 4, column 712, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... me and we became a good friend. If she didnt tell me the story I will never know any...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... be exposed and will not know about our past experience
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will not know about our past experience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59657701711 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40523179217 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486552567237 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3062885673 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405053937711 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134247493193 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104980450384 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273056620218 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064211068682 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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