Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
Some claim that information provided by the press does not relate to our lives and hence, reading newspapers and watching news programs wastes our time. In my personal opinion, I disagree with the former assertion. This essay will highlight the news as a vital source of information and knowledge.
A prominent claim to deliberate is that newspapers and news programs give people aware of important events. This borne by the fact that the authority frequently uses these platforms to inform citizens about serious situations and alarming problems. According to PEW Centre, 65% of people claimed that as they are very busy at work, reading newspapers or watching news programs is the only way to give them access to current situations.
A supplemental argument is that people who connect to the news have the opportunity to widen their knowledge. The rationale behind this is that many informative programs and newspapers give us essential information about various subjects that stem from environment statistics to ways to maintain our well-being. The Times recently reported that Vietnamese authorities created a program to inform people about ways to keep themselves safe from the Coronavirus.
Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, it now can be safely stated that the act of reading news and watching news programs is necessary as these platforms give us aware of important events and access to vital knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ng news programs wastes our time. In my personal opinion, I disagree with the former assertion. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
... themselves safe from the Coronavirus. Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, it ...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the Coronavirus. Subsequently weighing all of the aforementioned, it now can be safely st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30837004405 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91816887798 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5830010972 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283213354737 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115785627601 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670607373985 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180704975044 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394284325741 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.