the chart below shows the annual pay thousand of US dollars for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

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the chart below shows the annual pay ( thousand of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

The figure demonstrates the salary of physicians and other workers of seven different countries in ‎‎2004.‎
Overall, the United states had the highest annual pay for both doctors and other workers. On the ‎other hand ,while physicians of Finland had the lowest pay, the lowest salaries for other workers were ‎in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany with same amount in year.‎
Although physicians had the highest paid job, the difference of this annual pay was significantly ‎diverse between these 7 countries. Firstly, the US doctors received 120 thousand of dollar per year ‎claiming the first position among all countries. Secondly, France and Switzerland came in second place ‎with 70 thousand dollar annual salary and finally the lowest annual salary, which was 50 thousand dollar ‎per year, was in Finland.‎
The difference of annual salary of other workers was not significant. These employees were paid as ‎low as 20 thousand dollar per year in Italy, Germany, and Czech Republic .While the highest income for ‎other works was 40 thousand dollar, the second highest with no considerable difference was 30 ‎thousand dollar for France.‎

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46703296703 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74003998219 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0924018977 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366037915863 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214133942552 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786405285194 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235029616494 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187760729124 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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