The bar graph illustrates the number of students opting for particular university subjects during the academic year 2005. This essay will examine the trends and in furtherance discusses its prominent features.
In the overview, the sciences stand on the top while languages being the least in the case of boys. whereas girls have chosen social sciences the most and least interested in mathematics. Humanities is the only subject in which both sides are almost equally involved.
Now, let us closely analyze the data regarding each gender. considering the masculine learners' choices, sciences are at the peak with almost 21,000 members followed by mathematics containing around 19,000 of them. Social sciences, humanities, law, and literature fall under the mediocre category enclosing between 10,000 and 15,000 individuals. Finally, arts and languages stay below the rest including just 2000 and 1000 boys respectively.
On the other hand, observing the feminine interests, social sciences overshadows the rest with more than 24,000 girls accompanied by languages enclosing 18,000 of them. Involvement into sciences, humanities, and literature can be remarked as average as they embrace about 10,000 persons. At the bottom, we have mathematics and law with almost similar participation of 5000 members.
Considering all the above mentioned information, it can be concluded that boys are mostly into technical subjets and on the contrary, girls prefer non-technical ones.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...es being the least in the case of boys. whereas girls have chosen social sciences the m...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...analyze the data regarding each gender. considering the masculine learners choices, science...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, regarding, so, whereas, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72072072072 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87321012415 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9812570047 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.05438393483 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021473328886 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557123603205 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368422852035 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579534753112 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...es being the least in the case of boys. whereas girls have chosen social sciences the m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...analyze the data regarding each gender. considering the masculine learners choices, science...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, regarding, so, whereas, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72072072072 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87321012415 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9812570047 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.05438393483 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021473328886 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557123603205 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368422852035 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579534753112 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.