International travel has become more affordable and many countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Numerous nations are willing to welcome foreign tourists due to the affordability of travel abroad. This essay will suggest that creating job opportunities for the indigenous is the biggest advantage of this and contamination is the primary disadvantage.
Initially, the increase in number of tourists brings about financial benefits for local persons. These individuals are capable of raising their income thanks to selling souvenirs, specialties or being tour-guides., helping them ameliorate family condition as well as cover living costs. Moreover, tourism companies or travel agencies have a tendency to employ indigenous dwellers because of their knowledge of local tradition and geography. By the way of illustration, the flourish of tourism help people living in Hawaii increase their monthly income remarkably and improve the education background of local children.
Despite these advantages, the development of tourism also put the environment under the threat of pollution. In fact, waste and rubbish are always challenging issues of environmentalists. These factors annihilate the environment, leading to the vanishment of flora and fauna. In addition, the health of both tourists and indigenous people is influenced negatively and severely by the aforementioned problems. For example, several countries in Kenya are in a bid to resolve contamination caused by foreign visitors when they come here to go hunting in safaris.
To conclude, it is obvious that should the number of visitors increases, local people shall be facilitated to earn financial benefits thanks to activities related to tourism, however, they also be careful that the risk of pollution is predictable and may affect badly on their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6833976834 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14784782053 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5473163613 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158790714078 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519225348797 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444762192544 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887798764731 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520581639666 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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