In this contemporary era, it is quite common that both parents are employed and leave to work daily. In this situation, they barely find time to spend with their kids because of which arises a need for grandparents to be the child's guardians. Even though it has proven to be beneficial, there exist certain shortcomings too. This essay closely examines both the cases and in furtherance declares which has the upper hand.
Firstly, let us put a light on the positives. When it comes to nurturing little ones, no one can be better than grandparents who possess vast experience and have already done parenting earlier. They help adolescents in comprehending good and differentiating it from its contrast besides developing moral attributes in them. Moreover, parents generally get irritated by some misdoings of the kids but the elders embrace extensive patience and handle them with the utmost care being their best friends. Thus, old people can effectively look after the under-aged.
Now, hurtling towards the drawbacks of this situation there are scarcely few of them. One thing that bothers them is their physical restraint, due to this they cannot accompany the child while playing outdoor games. For example, a grandfather cannot play cricket with his grandson enthusiastically. Sometimes it takes a lot of physical work in controlling 10-year old kids as they will be running and jumping all around the house.
Considering the above-cited information, it is obvious that the advantages overshadow the drawbacks. So, it can be concluded that grandparents taking care of children will be beneficial to a large extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27203065134 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95576425465 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8909361859 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219352182577 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583998515952 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515689722472 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125008708136 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288421251438 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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