Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the price of product or service is the main consideration before deciding to purchase something. Although the price tags are important to households, I believe that it is essential to consider other significant factors.
It is important that people take time to reflect on how much money they should spend on the items whether that product is cheap or not . Firstly, numerous people are tempted to buy goods or services thanks to promotional programs. As a result, they can get the goods with affordable price. Secondly, the high costs of living in the big cities are also considerable problems for residents, so they must expend reasonably with their available budget. In Viet Nam for instance, the individuals have pay for their food, accommodations, clothes and even health care services, therefore, they make a great effort to save money.
However, I believe that there are occasions where price should be ignored completely. On the one hand, if we buy the low quality products, this will directly affect our health. Particularly, consuming poor quality foods such as fast food or pre-made food renders us to suffer from food poisoning or even potentially life-threatening. On the other hand, when buyers purchase the used car with inexpensive price, they can pay excessive expenditure on maintenance or repair. Additionally, it is hard to check the vehicle’s history like accidents, illegal use et al and these poor quality goods are thus the major culprit of danger to human health.
Inconclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I am convinced that we should not take the price into first consideration, we had better opt prime goods in order to ensure the health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: A dot is missing here: 'et al.'
Suggestion: et al.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11071428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93190059238 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4218256515 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128886434442 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503243096798 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037368943078 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077966045987 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372185438892 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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