Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary society, issues regarding weather have been invariably arousing public concern, especially climate change. Consequently, there is a school of thought holding that in lieu of militating against climate change, it is more necessary to devise plans to coexist with it. Personally, I am convinced that there is no likelihood that this movement, which may bring human nothing other than more predicament for human , can be viable
In the first place, it is virtually impossible making an attempt to coexist with climate change by virtue of the fact that the power and influence of nature is formidably strong and ineluctably unpreventable . To clarify ,as a result of climate change,the globe has been progressively heating up, which in turn gives rise to a plethora of natural disasters taking its toll on human and many places. Tsunami is a case in point, which can drive human to the verge of death and clean up all existing creatures merely within a second. To that end, even the best-laid plans can hardly vouch for the safety of human when confronting the danger brought by tsunami.
In the second place, this movement can be financially disadvantageous in an extreme degree. Heretofore every activity of human race are inextricably entwined with weather, which can entail human a colossal amount of budget creating methods to adapt to the alteration of climate. For instance, farmers primarily pivots on favourable weather to have their crops producing the best outcomes, which can be impeded by interrupted period of drought if climate change occurs. Proving that farmers build enormous tanks to store water in advance, the supply can surely not be deployed in perpetuity, which is not only exorbitant but also results in a parlous state in terms of agricultural production for farmers in the future
In conclusion, coexisting with climate change, from which human can reap nothing, is totally unattainable. By contrast,if human take measures to ward off climate change in time, the reserve of the abovementioned movement can truly take place
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19760479042 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86665084634 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8495144556 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.818181818 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720419299748 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309522577681 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225473344361 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530393830288 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176907871166 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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